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Review:yorkgal says:
Hi, this is your requested review from the forums :) sorry it took me so long, homeworks been up to my ears and family times not been great lately either- sorry! Thanks for being so patient.

First of all, i love how you worked the banter and general conversation between friends so it seemed natural, like something that would happen in real life. Very realistic.

Everyones characters are well potrayed, im already annoyed with Ellen (and im not sure whether thats a good thing or not...) i liked how Albus and Rose seemed ok with the fact their parents saved everyone elses butts because in most fics i read, they either really hate it or are stuck up because of it.

You're plot seems to have the automatic ability to be able to develop in any way you want and i cant wait to see how you go- Rose trying out for the Chudley Cannons, clearly Ron will be proud! I'm left wondering whether she'll make it and what position she'll end up playing. I cant wait to see it work out!

It seems that everythings flowing smoothly but i feel like something will happen soon (Enter Scorpius) to mix things up a bit!

Good Luck! I'll be sure to return and read more!
Yorkgal

Author's Response: Hi!
I don't know why but I'm always surprised when readers/reviewers say that the conversations and relationships seem natural. Lol, so thank you!
Its okay that you don't like Ellen, because she isn't really all that important... or is she? We'll see. I'm glad you like the plot and flow!
Thank you so much for your review! It is totally appreciated! :D


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