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Review:Genius says:
That was really very intense chapter.Infact you write very chapter filled with so much love & pain...I really love it!
But on one condition I was upset(dont get me wrong).maybe do or dont take the advie!It's up to you:)

Since last 3 or 4 chapter, I feel they are filler chapters, you know like- I hope you understand. The story is not moving much forward...There is no action in it..Make a BIG chapter.(I will love you for that)


Author's Response: Hey there!

Well, that's the thing - it's not an action story. My writing is focused on characterization, so I put my efforts into really showing the pain that the characters are going through and drawing parallels that explain their feelings for one another. So I'm afraid if you feel that these chapters are "filler", you might not like the rest of the story, as most of it is going to be like that.

All the same, thanks for reading and reviewing! :)


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