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Review:IndigoLove says:
Very good story, and I don't quite know where your going with this story but I will offer what I'm thinking right now~
Anna is great, don't neglect her character, its easy you have Layla who is obviously a saint *chuckles* But Anna's charrie is much more relatable don't lose her or write her off. (As in turn her into a jerk or make her fall off the planet)
Adam seems like a good kid, if Layla cheats on him Layla will be at fault (She hasn't but this is a severe pet peeve- girl cheats and the boy ends up the bad guy?) if you write that or a breakup or whatever your planning people should be angry at Layla.
Layla isn't flawless, cos nobody is. Just make sure you don't over do it with the 'Perfect' or 'amazing' to describe her (You haven't just warning you if you do I'll have to write this off as a twilight)
Layla's going to bother me, as in she has everything going for her and she's not happy but her character is /very/ well written. Just try not to make everyone love her. xD
AND WRITEWRITEWRITE,
Indi

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your feedback. No need to worry about Anna, I have a lot planned out for her in this story. Adam, too. I'd rather like to have a boyfriend like him, Layla should be more grateful. But I really am grateful for your feedback. It's so nice to know what people think of my story and criticism is NEVER frowned upon. Thanks a lot. :)
Ta!

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