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Review:Tonks1247 says:
Hello :)
This story was so artfully done.I love it. I love how the thoughts are described as monsters, and it's creepy, because in a way, these thoughts do cross my mind. Not anywhere near as bad as Roxie, but her thoughts come through the same...sorta. Definately a realistic story! And the emotion in it is so real...so easy to feel. And all of her cousins worrying about her was pretty cool too. The only part that effected the flow was you sometimes switched between present and past tense. But otherwise, your description of thantophobia was excellent and I loved the emotion! Great job!
~Grimmerz

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The monster idea just kind of happened accidently when I imagined the thoughts filling her mind, sort of like attacking - hence claws and mosters :P
I think this phobia is so abrupt and shocking that it makes sence for all of us to have it so some degree! Freaked me out slightly when I was writing it :P
Oops! I always do that with the tenses! Will go back now to edit :P
Thanks for the review :)


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