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Review:parashar_harry says:
well written after a very long time i am studying lupin character of such type means which showcase his poverty and lowliness .
it was a long back when i have studied an amzing novel based on his life and poverty .
i liked it and feeling sad for lupin. u have developed a very good relationship between moody and him. generally people don't write over moody.
the scene of cupboard was very touching ,it make me sad.
i am eager to see the remus reaction when he will find that dream is real.
i am curious for next chapter . hope it will be soon
thank you for this one
10/10
PS- its just a suggestion. why not u try the other character also it will help u to develop ur skill of writing . as u have mastered remus character . i am sure u can do justice with other characters also which have not get more space in novel, like flitwick, longbottom etc.


i am going to add u in my fav author list now ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you liked this chapter, and that you felt I captured Lupin's character well! ;)

I am also so glad that you liked the relationship between Mad-Eye and Lupin, and you're right, Moody isn't written about an awful lot, maybe I'll change this!!! He is a very interesting character afterall, well, we'll see what ideas find me! ;)

Don't worry, the third chapter is in the queue, and it has been in the queue for 4 days, and it says that the length of the queue is currently 5 days, so I am hoping that it will be validated either tomorrow or very early on Sunday morning, so hopefully you will be able to read it then! :)

With regard to your suggestion; yes, you're right, Lupin completely dominates my fan-fiction, basically because he is my favourite character EVER! But you are right, in order to develop as a writer, I need to explore other characters too! I agree with you! I have done non-Lupin fics in the past, remember about Snape and Filch and the Mirror of Erised? Then "I Hope He Will Understand" was about Harry and Teddy (but I suppose Lupin's memory dominates that a lot so maybe it doesn't count...). I also did "How Hogwarts Recieved its Name" which is all about Gryffindor, Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw and Slytherin founding the school. But you are 100% right, I do over-write Lupin. I'll try and come up with some new non-Lupin related stories for you! I have actually written a one-shot from the point of view of Ron Weasley, entitled "Why I am Afraid of Spiders". I intend to submit it to the queue once chapter three of this story is validated, so keep a look out for that! But I'll see if I can come up with some different non-Lupin fics for you over Christmas!!

Also, I feel so honoured that you have added me to your favourite author list! Thank you so much!!! :-)

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