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Review:Hogwartsishome says:
Hello, it's me with my promised reviews! Okay, so for a first chapter I think it's okay. The stuff you needed to put across was definitely said and I think Hermione is characterised quite well. The only iffy point (if you could call it that) that I have really is that the sentences are quite short if you know what I mean, as in they only include the bare minimum amount of information and they're quite simple? It's easily corrected of course and then you'll have not just a good chapter, which it is at the moment, but a brilliant chapter!

Overall the chapter introduces me to the story quite well and I like the story so far!

Author's Response: Hopefully my sentences improved as the chapters went,if not,I will keep it in mind! Can't wait to continue this story,you're a great source of inspiration!

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