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Review:sophie_hatter says:
Ooh, Tenabra is marvellous in this chapter! I loved the insight into Herodonthus, too.

Harry was so true to type in the hospital/car journey scenes, but Susan was superb. She's my newest heroine:-) And I thought the reference to Neville's suspicions about the cloak was spot on.

Hermys was very well written - curious and interesting.

The description of Ron, Harry and Hermione moving about in the memory were great. I loved how they moved backwards and forwards though it, and I was pleased that Ron was driving. And the concept of Advanced Memory Training is a great one.

And I thought that you nailed Hermione's emotion in the end - when she cries and shouts it's just perfect, as is Ron's reaction to her. Good job:-)

Author's Response: The end of the road, for now...

Tenabra is a very complex, involved villain. I think of her as being a lot like Dr. Moriarity of Sherlock Holmes fame: intelligent, sophisticated, well-read, completely justified in her own mind and utterly devoid of qualms about what she's doing.

The elves have many interesting powers of insight. Hopefully the information will serve Harry and Ron well.

Memories were one of the greatest concepts that JKR came up with. The Prince's Tale in Deathly Hallows was a mesmerizing read. So many questions answered. I was very happy to be able to use the idea in at least a small way.

Thanks again for reviewing!


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