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Review:sophie_hatter says:
I think this is a particularly strong chapter.

Tenabra gets scarier, Hermione starts to screw her head back on, Harry gets feisty, Artie gets some action (hopefully:-)), and the firefight is brilliant.

Ron and Percy felt very natural, the section with Harry and Lily is very touching, and I'm glad that Percy came good in the end.

And as for your lovely Author's note - you're very welcome, it's my pleasure:-)

Author's Response: I can't give you enough credit in general, but this chapter was one where I would have been particularly lost without you.

As I've said in a few chapters, Tenabra is the anti-Harry. She's 100% in this for herself; nobody else matters to her. She's ruthless, unscrupulous and she doesn't care who gets hurt. I wonder what could have made her this way? ;-)

Poor Hermione is starting to pull it together. She's been through a lot, and it just felt like it was time for her to begin to heal. I hope the timing feels right to the readers.

Thanks for reviewing!


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