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Review:Keira7794 says:
aw! This is such a good story! :)
The description is beautifal, the characterisation is spot-on and I wanted to read more!
You can really see Moody's personality within this, yet still slightly innocent as he is still at Hogwarts. I also liked the mention about Tom Riddle, it would make sense for the three of them to go to school together. Is there a possible love-triangle?
I hope you carry on with this, and look forward to readign more :)

Author's Response: Thank you! You have no idea how much I've wanted to get Moody spot on in this chapter, he is very hard to write. His complicated personality meant I had to just write based on what others had written and JK herself of course. This is a love triange, it says so in the sig. I am definitely carrying this on, I have chapter 2 & half of chapter 3 written but I want to get some chapters written before submitting, hitting writers block and then giving up.

Bex


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