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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
Oh no! That last sentence. Why do you like to do this to me? Everytime you end with a sort of...well, I don't want to call it a cliffhanger but you end with a sentence that always fills me with dread. I know bad things are going to happen and I've accepted it but I really wish bad things wouldn't happen.

Maybe I haven't accepted it.

So, I'm going to make some assumptions. I'm really bad at guessing what's going to happen BUT. I don't think Sirius is going to let up about her moving in with him and I think she will but then since you're following the time line of the books then she'll have to meet Harry and that's just going to be terrible on her because she still feels bad about not being friendly with Lily during those years they weren't talking. Also! Sirius will have the Order meetings at the Black House and Snape will be there so she'll have a run in with Snape and I don't know if she'll stick with Sirius or Snape. OR! Wait for it, she'll pick Sirius and then Sirius dies so she breaks down (because she's in a fragile state already) and she dies too because why would Snape help her?

I'm probably wrong but no matter what that last sentence of the chapter equals drama.

Bring it on! :D

Author's Response: Wow, you've got some great ideas there! I've actually gone in a totally different direction - the story is complete, it's just a matter of posting all of it. Your ideas make me see that this story could have gone so many different ways, and I think all of them would have been interesting.

Thanks for reading and reviewing so faithfully!

academica :)


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