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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Aw this story was very good.

I loved the idea of Ron challenging James to a game of chess as everyone knows that you understood Harry's reaction. The idea of him having to clean the attic was also good because it didnt seem to be a fitting prize for Ron, I'd have expected something completely different!

I also love the fact that you've made Harry and James spend time together even though they've obviously grown apart because of James being a teenager! The idea of Ginny knowing what they were up to and disapproving was completely believable.

S.P.E.W is amazing! The idea of that being the revenge on Ron was a little twist as I was expecting it to be a little more dramatic but it was really effective.

Well done on this!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review.

When writting that, I tried to remember what it was like when I was 16; I didn't have much contact with my parents (my friends were SO muc more important!!!) and this is the kind of things that would bring a father and his child together (or so it did for me!!!).
I'm glad you found Ginny's reaction believable. The way I pictured it, she was probably just as happy as Harry that James was coming back to them, even if it was just for a little moment.

Glad you liked the plan! I thought that it would be the best thing to push Ron's buttons. 20 years free of SPEW and then it comes back to haunt him! I didn't want to go into anything dramatic, keep things fairplay and light is always my idea of a good prank.

Thanks again for the review!


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