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Review:Akussa says:
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Well, this was the most awesome story I,ve read in a long, long time! I laughed so hard at all the clichés and the pricelless pieces of dialogues. thanks for making me laugh that much in a horrible day!

There isn't much for me to say when it comes to critiques or comments because there is nothing to change. You tackled a wide range of clichés and your Mary Sue was perfectly in character. I did notice one little typo though :

"...don’t ask how he knew her name, its love."; should be 'it's love'

My favorite sentence was this one :

"They were so popular and awesome that the entire era had been renamed to reflect their awesomeness."

This is a thought I've had for a long time. I always wondered why they didn't name that era "first war" rather than "Marauder's" and to see it written so bluntly was amazing.

Great job, I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, glad you liked it!

And that's a good point about the marauder's era, I'm sure the likes of Snape would definetely not approve of that moniker.

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