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Review:javct says:
Back again!
I liked this chapter as well. You have written this story beautifully, I honestly can't find many faults in this story.
Just one thing that I noticed: don't the women have to curtesy when a man enters a room and don't the men have to bow? I understand that they are distant cousins but I thought they still had to bow.

Apart from that, you had the characterisation nailed again and along with everything else. You should defiantly continue with this story, I'll be disappointed if you stop (I'm defiantly going to keep reading this!)
Good luck with the rest of your story!
*jaz, 10/10

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you! That's glorious to hear! I'm shocked, though, as I never expected this story to turn out so well - yet it's become a very addicting story to write (which isn't a bad thing at all - I have issues when it comes to completing stories :P).

I'll double check that one thing about the curtsies - perhaps having Lily curtsy while Rose forgets (or doesn't know to) would be a good idea. It would help explain why Scorpius is so rude to Rose throughout - it's not just her Weasleyness, but also her behaviour toward him. Thank you for pointing that out! And many thanks for the compliments - I'll definitely be continuing this story! :D

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