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Review:EverDiggory says:
My jaw dropped,when he said Hermione wouldn't ask me such a stupid question. Like holy crap. Ten shock value points for you. Mainly, in this one his anger was just suddenly there. You should at least explain the build up a little,so it's not just there. If you intended it to be a quick coming anger,try to clarify that. I was confused at first,because he just snapped on her,and it took me a second to piece it together. Try to clarify,otherwise god job. 8.5/10

Author's Response: Yeah, I have to admit it is rather shocking. A couple of reviewers have mentioned that it's extremely sudden, Harry snapping at Ginny like that, so when I go back to edit I'll definitely have to think about improving that side and making it more obvious to the reader as to why Harry's behaving as he is! Thanks so much, your reviews are all so constructive and you've given me a lot to work on so I can't thank you enough! :D

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