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Review:EverDiggory says:
I found it interesting how you showed us the readers how Harry and Hermione have almost a different bond then Harry and Ron,as well as the bond between Ron and Hermione.Harry's speech about mourning,not celebrating could have used a bit of explanation,but it sufficed. The only big thing that stood out to me, was Harry's emotions need to be more portrayed in his thoughts,but otherwise,good start. By the way,I'm reviewing,as promised,my username is EverMalfoy on the forums.onto the next chapter! 8/10

Author's Response: Yeah, I agree, to be honest I think my first few chapters are slightly sketchy and when I finish the entire fic I'll most likely go back and edit a lot of stuff to make everything more believeable, so yes I'd probably agree with you on the fact that Harry's thoughts and emotions need to be more included. I suppose I could have improved Harry's speech but I didn't know quite what to put at the time so I'll probably improve that as well later on! Thank you so much for your review, you've given me some great feedback and hopefully I can work with it to improve my story! Much appreciated! :D

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