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Review:AC_rules says:
Eeee! You're just so good! I keep saying to myself that I should try the every word count challenge, but I could not managed to get anywhere in 500 words. Sometimes my paragraphs end up that long (okay, slight exageration) so I'm always sort of stunned when people managed to do amazing things with like, no words.

The imagery on this is just mouthwatering. I read it aloud to myself, I'm not sure why, but it seemed liked one of thoes stories which was asking to be read out loud. It was great out loud, by the way - and it highlighted the fact that you're writing is so precise and perfectly executed.

The relationship, the weather and everything. It was so optimistic and wonderful.

As normal, I virtually have nothing to say. There was one line at the beginning, wait... "For this moment, all was still" that made me stop for a second having an inner debated about whether it should be 'was' or not. I'm sure that is actually correct (I'm no grammar person) but it just seemed to be quite strange to have 'this moment' right next to the past tense. Probably just me though, so feel free just to ignore that.

Anyway, I really liked it (as always - stop being so good. You'll make people feel bad) and I'm verrryyy impressed with the whole 500 words this.

-AC

Author's Response: Thank you so much Helen :)

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