You should never stop writing about the Black family. :) I ADORED your Sirius and Regulus one-shot, and when I saw you'd posted last in the battle thread, I rushed over here before someone could post ahead of me, because I've had my eye on this for a while now. And I wasn't the least bit disappointed -- you are truly a gifted writer.
I think you got the personalities of the Black sisters all really accurately, especially since they're children here, and that's not something that's a terribly easy thing to do. Even Narcissa, who had all of maybe ten lines, I can just /see/ as the Narcissa she grows up to be. I have a lot of admiration for that. And what's more, you seem to have incorporated the stereotypical big-sister, middle-sister, little-sister personalities, as well. I don't know if it was intentional, but I enjoyed reading it. I have two sisters and only two sisters, as shown here, and it was so easy to relate to.
Your imagery continues to be lovely and beautiful, as always. :3 For something you claim is unedited, this is written EXTREMELY well. My favorite line --
"Let's make a daisy chain," Andy said, and they spent their afternoon pulling up the flowers that grew at the edge of the forest, admiring the cool touch of the creamy petals on their hands, tying their stems together.
There is just something so peaceful and serene and lovely and calming about that sentence. It's beautiful. I will be watching for updates I can review for you, because I'm really excited to see where you take the three! Excellent job, I cannot say it enough. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I very much enjoy writing about them. ^-^
I admit I was a little nervous about writing them at this age, because while I wanted them to reflect who they would be, I didn't want them to be exactly the same... does that make sense? haha
but I am a younger sister myself, so I'm not surprised that that came through, heh! :) I actually only have one older sister, but I'm well aware of what it's like to be the youngest, so their interactions were sort of based off of my own knowledge.
Thank you very much for the review - it means a lot to me! :) I'm excited to see where these three take me myself.