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Review:hogwarts4ever547 says:
this chapter was completely amazing! from the quidditch scene to the party even the was you described the enchanted pictures on the parchment was amazing...but the sad thing is that she has such a difficult home life but i suppose that's what makes her stronger in every sense...sorry of that last part didn't make any sense...
the best scene was the party because i love how you described her drunken state and the type of chemistry that goes on between her and james throughout the entire story.
i love it...but there's just one thing that is wrong with this entire story...there is no chapter to read after chapter seven!
so all i ask you is this...please will you update on the next chapter because i'm getting kind of ansty because this is kind of like my fourth time reading this story...

i am sorry if i am sounding like a nag but i just really want to know what happens next with kamara and james that's all but other than that it was an awesome chapter and i think this is one of those brilliant stories which deserves to be on one of the top ten lists along with a few of your other stories

loves ya and can't wait to read your next chapter
peace out:) ;) :p

Author's Response: literally, i pretty much just had a spazz attack! thanks so much for the meaningful review! seriously! i've been working on another chapter for a while now, but we'll see where it goes. keep your eyes out, and kara and james will, of course, get their ending!

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