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Review:CambAngst says:
Tagging you from the Review the Person Above You thread in the common room.

OK, so this isn't the kind of story I normally go for, but it was well done. You did a really nice job of mixing and matching contemporary cultural references (Oprah, Conan, Springer) with canon references and back story. My favorite part was definitely Molly's impromptu appearance at the end.

I noticed two small typos that you might want to look at:

"Basically, I ever wanted was to be loved." - should be "all I ever wanted"

"Serious turned to great Cedric," - I think you meant "Sirius turned to greet Cedric"

Otherwise, good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I'm glad you could enjoy it even if it isn't really your cup of tea.

Nice catch, I think I fell for my own pun re Sirius

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