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Review:Slytherin_Ravenclaw_chick says:
*Cracks Knuckles* Let’s do this:

Thoughts while reading:

“Outside, it was a picture-perfect Christmas.” Oh, promising.

“He stared at his sketch for a moment, before the steam melted away and his drawing evaporated.” Amazing imagery!

“His parents were in another screaming argument” Conflict!

“…even if it only lasted for Christmas day?” How sad! My heart is breaking!

“They were just cheap little knickknacks, wood carvings of Christmas trees and snowmen that the boy had spent a few of his lonely days whittling.” Even sadder!!! I want to hug him!

“Severus scowled at her before looking towards the one person he had really come to see.” Oh! Must be lily!

“Lily Evans was sitting on the floor; her legs crossed Indian-style.” Yep!

“One day, maybe he could celebrate such a happy Christmas with Lily.” How sweet

“Holding it close to him, Severus closed his eyes, wishing with all of his heart for a happy Christmas in his future.” Again, so sweet!

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Wow, amazing chapter, I loved it! It was excellently written with beautiful imagery! I thought you captures Snape wonderfully, no matter how sad it might be!

Author's Response: Woohoo! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for taking the time to review this, and I can't wait until January 6th ^_^ This review made my day!

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