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Review:CambAngst says:
I just tagged you from the Review the Person Above You thread, and I'm glad I did. Very clever story. I like the way you told the story. It all sounds very in-character for Sirius. The details of his life in Azkaban were very believable, if a bit depressing. I especially enjoyed the reference to his dear cousin Bella.

I did notice a few small typos. I think the sentence where he's convinced the other prisoners to tell Bella to shut up should read "...the other prisoners **doing** the same." You're missing a beginning quotation mark in the paragraph that opens with "Oh yes, I've already read it."

The reference to Arthur Weasley winning the sweepstakes was a terrific idea. That paragraph was a little long and awkwardly worded, however. It became a hard to follow in places. I also felt like the next paragraph read awkwardly because there wasn't a good indication of how much time passed between the Minister's departure and Sirius's escape.

Overall, this was a great start. Looking forward to seeing more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for being so detailed. I really appreciate things like that, it makes all our writing better doesn't it?
I never thought putting in that part with Bella would be so popular lol. Honestly it just came on a whim :P
I'm glad you liked the idea of referencing the sweepstakes, it's also very canon, when Sirius was telling Remus, Hermione, Harry and Ron how he escaped, it was how he found out where Peter was.
I'm currently working on editing the next chapter, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing :)


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