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Review:AC_rules says:
Okay recently I've become facinated by the whole Black sister dynamic, honestly - they're such inherently facinating characters. And you managed to pinpoint exactly whats so interesting about them in your first paragraph.

You're so good at creating bits of poetic-profound bits of pros and weaving them into your stories - and really, its beautiful and you should be really proud of that. Throughout all your stories theres always lines that take my breath away and make me just want to sit and think about them for a long time.

There are some things that are meant to be unbreakable.

That is such a wonderful way to start a chapter and I loved loved love loved it. I loved the characterisation of the Black sisters too - with them working together and playing together. Thoes bits weren't quite as beautiful and stunning as the beginnning bit (and to often how your writing is - because really, you're very talented) and obviously they didn't have to be because they were the main section but, hmm... I guess what I'm trying to say here is that I thought it was really good, but that YOU could have made some of it better as you're talented enough to do so. I'm probably not making any sense here. Maybe its just cause I'm tired and therefore words don't feel as smooth when I read them at half tweleve but... well yeah.

You're characterisation was excellent and I don't think I could find a typo or whatever if I tried. I love the whole concept too, of the Black sisters, and I'm so glad that more people are beginning to write about them. I definately want to read more, so I'm adding it to my favourites.

Goodness, this wound up quite long...

-AC

Author's Response: I've recently fallen in love with the Black family, I think! So wonderfully complicated...

ack. Thank you. :) That means a lot to me. eep

The beginning definitely was a bit more poetical and different from the rest. I think I get what you're say (and hah, I totally understand what you mean about half twelve... almost midnight here!) I do plan on editing this at some point, so maybe I can work on that then :)

I definitely do love writing about them and I've really been enjoying what I've been writing for this so far. So thank you very much for the review! ♥


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