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Review:EnigmaticEyes16 says:
Aw, I'm so happy for them, they finally get to be a couple! At least, I hope. There's still two more chapters left, which I have every intention of reading even though this is your last of the five reviews.

It hadn't even occurred to me that Lily would go to Dumbeldore, even though I know Snape obviously went to Dumbledore. Although it's clearly turned out a bit differently since Narcissa is already dead and Snape is still alive and there was no baby like Harry, or prophecy, or anything like that.

And she joined the order like Snape originally did! Although I do worry about what will happen if Voldemort finds out that she's no longer on his side. That certainly wouldn't turn out well. Oh, I can't wait to read the next chapters!

This is really good story and I'm so happy I read it! And I will read the last two chapters either today or tomorrow. And I'll probably review the last one. Keep up the good work, and congratulations again on your win in the Birthday Massacre Challenge!


Author's Response: Yes, they finally get to be a couple. My shipping dreams come true at last :)

It is a bit different - as you've seen, Lily walked back into Severus's life to find nothing but tragedy, and it hurts her to see someone who was previously so happy hurting so much. I think she's struck by the fact that his life didn't turn out much better than hers, and it was a bit conducive for their coupledom. Yes, she did join the Order, and of course Voldemort will be unhappy if he finds out...

I'm so flattered that you've enjoyed it enough to finish it out. I hope the last couple of chapters don't disappoint. Thanks again for choosing my story -- I really loved writing it!


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