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Review:AC_rules says:
I am back and ready for more reviewing action! I read your response to my last review and I think the reason so many people are giving you advice because we can all see that this story has so much POTENTIAL. Like seriously, the potential is just leaking out of it - your writing style is easy to read and very likable, you've got the start of some really good characters and yeah... you've just got to watch that it stays orginal and fresh otherwise people won't give it enough time - but I know that you're going to be such a brilliant writer and I can't wait to continue seeing you improve and such (which you definately willl).

Chapter-specific stuff... well, as theres been little plot yet this is quite a slow introduction - which is perfectly fine, of course, but maybe you should throw a complete curve ball in early to surprise everyone. I liked the prank though - simple but effective :)

Still really good

-AC

Author's Response: Aw thanks so much *insert heart emoticon thingy here*

I'm so glad people think so! It gives me loads of confidence :D
there is a massive plot change in the next chapter but I'm not happy about the way its written so I will be looking over that chapter when I next have time! LWG xx


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