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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Hi hun! Oh how I love well written Founders eras. I think this was a wonderfully refreshing and indeed enjoyable read.

You captured the era rather nicely, especially with the simile 'like thread on a loom.' I love that! The language you write with also suits the era; not too complicated but sophisticated and quite serious. But when you say 'Daughters were seen and not heard' it just jars the flow slightly, almost as if you were perhaps trying too hard to fit the time period and prove it's a founders.

Rowena is characterised very differently to the stereotype which I love! The only thing is that occasionally you describe her personality contradictively. You say that she has started focusing on sewing and household abilities rather than imparting wisdom, then when she walks into the room you describe her as rational, strong-willed, independent before she has a massive fight.

Please don't take this as criticism, I love the story so much! It's wonderfully written. I'm just trying to up my reviewing capabilities slightly!
Hope this was helpful (ish!)
LWG :)

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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