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Review:Woodrow Rynne says:
AWEEE...

I was reading this cute story with this silly grin on my face. :P It was so sweet! And in a way, quite chilly too, if you think about it. Mind boggling, isn't it? How they grow up to be so different. Especially Bella- I cannot imagine her as Bellatrix after this. Despite that, the personalities were very realistic and believable. I loved how you portrayed Bella as a little bossy and confident. And her rebellion! How can I forget that? Even though it's really subtle- I mean she only goes to the edge of the forest, but still. It actually suits her.

And Cissy- you can really see how young she is through her naivety and wanting to believe everything her elder sisters tell her.

The beginning as well as the ending were simply beautiful. It tugged at my heart, really. You write really well! Very naturally. :)

In short, I loved this. :)

PS-I used to make flower chins when I was young too! :P

Author's Response: It is weird to think about, isn't it? Bellatrix was once a child too. Hopefully over the course of the story I'll be able to convince you how she ended up growing up to be who she was, haha :) But I'm glad you liked Bella! She was sort of daunting to write, but I think I'm pretty happy with how she turned out.

Thank you very much for the review! :) I'm glad you liked it.

(And yay! I used to make flower chains when I was little as well.)


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