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Review:Jen says:
Nice, but somewhat pointless in a way. Sorry if that sounds harsh - I don't mean it to... I just find myself wondering why you wrote this.

Having said that, I found it both sweet and sad that 19 years later she is still very much in love with Fred, but trying to get on with her life. I like the bits about her new friendships with Cho & Orchid and had a giggle about the jinxes that she and Delphine weren't able to use properly.

This is very well written (of course - you wrote it & you have a beautiful style), I just don't comprehend your reasoning for writing it.

Author's Response: Ahh, my reason for writing it. Well, you see, being the author, I'm the one who created Hollis. After writing about her for months, I was a bit invested in her life and got to wondering, halfway through the story, what her future would be like. So for me, it was closure. I must correct you, however, in your interpretation that she was still very much in love with Fred. She kept the daydream charm just as she kept trinkets from all of her other boyfriends, and by the time she's a professor at Hogwarts she can think of Fred as an old friend. She was no longer in love with him, but all the same, the various men she'd dated over the years still weren't the right fit. The one she was supposed to end up with, in reality, was Lee. In my head, that's who she's with.

Thank you so much for all of your wonderful reviews. :)


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