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Review:StarryLaura says:
Classic Dramione dance one-shot, in truth. But it's different in the way that it was Ron that brought them back together, not their own choice. :)

I really like the fact that even though Ron "has the emotional range of a teaspoon", it was because he loved Hermione that he realized she wasn't truly happy with him, and that Draco had been withdrawn ever since the relationship had ended. Maybe that's why Hermione described it as "an open wound", because she hadn't been able to accept that she loved Draco yet.

I really loved how Draco was scolding himself for letting her go last time, because in truth, he's an extremely selfish person and he gets what he wants in the end. But I like how over the dilemma of Hermione, he hesitates and doesn't persevere at it like he does for everything else.

Honestly, I have to say that the dance and the last line of the story are quite cliche, but definitely effective in conveying their feelings. The passionate dance moves and her provocative dress really bring out their emotions, and the way Draco followed her when she ran and she said that line, it's so sweet. :) Kudos for a new twist on the classic Dramione one-shot.

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