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Review:StarryLaura says:
Wow.

Your stories are so dark and beautiful. I never knew that unhappy Draco/Hermione pairings could be so amazing.

Well, I'd like to say that the fact that Pansy's threats were still haunting him whenever he spoke to Hermione was quite confusing at first, but it really added to the effect of the story. It gave this haunted feeling, that he could never tell the truth to her anymore. And the fact that he even cheated on Hermione with Pansy makes that feeling even worse...

The chest of pictures and notes was very sentimental too. It's very significant that Draco kept all of Hermione's but Pansy destroyed all of his. And when Pansy wreaked havoc on the ones he kept, it was so...frightening, I guess.

And when Draco murdered her in the bathtub...goodness. I think she planned for him to do that, the way she didn't struggle but just gave in. Like she knew that if she died, Hermione would find out and it would ruin the relationship. And it did. The idea that Draco never really loved Hermione kills me (heheh shippers, all the way) but it's really breathtaking, the way you wrote it.

Last of all...THE ENDING. Holy...honestly, I don't even know what to say. The water on his arm... O.O It's so surreal, and maybe his imagination, but it definitely portrays how conflicted he is, how much he can't forget Pansy even though he wants to...

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