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Review:Serendipity1234 says:
Hi!
I loved this! It was so intense!
And the end was so mysterious...i began to like Gerty a bit more in this chapter because she was loyal, determined and a good fighter, even if her boyfriend is a creep.
AND I ADORE Audrey/Regulus. They're such a great couple and so complex. It's great that they care so much for each other and that they see behind each other's masks.
I got the feeling that Remus may eventually get together with Ara. Obviously Sirius/Ara are going pretty strong right now and I actually do like them as a couple, but Ara hasn't forgotten Remus yet and he seems to think very well of her...though maybe that's just leading to them becoming close friends. I love that I don't really know what's going to happen!
And I do like Remus/Claryce so far...but o really had imagined her with Sirius more. I don't know.
I like how we saw more of James and Lily in this chapter as well, and that all the girls seem even more connected so far!
I really want to see them become the most unlikely, odd bunch of close friends :)
and I love Daniel. He's awesome. I'm hoping he gets a girl, too. I kind of see him with Gerty for the simple reason that I don't see her relationship with Logan going well and she's the only one left for me to see him with.
And I'm also wondering who the helpful Ravenclaw beater was in the fight? Was it Daniel? Because I get the feeling it might be, but I'm a little confused now that I think back to it.
I also liked hearing more about the guys Claryce is friends with. We don't know much about them yet, but I like what I know so far.

Please update soon?! I'm dying to read more :)

Author's Response: Thanks again for a lovely review!

'Ravenclaw beater'? I've not reread this chapter in a while but I think that's referring to Jason. He's not mentioned by name (because Ara doesn't know his name) but he was also in the Three Broomsticks and helping James get people out. Daniel's not on the Quidditch team and he was mostly under the table opposite Audrey, shooting curses from there :)

Know she's not the loveliest of girls but I do love writing Gerty and glad her (admittedly few) redeeming characteristics are beginning to come through! :) And I simply can not comment on Ara's lovelife ;)

Thanks again for such a positive review! Stay tuned :)

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