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Review:CambAngst says:
Another great addition to one of my favorite ongoing stories in the archives.

First off, it's obvious that you took your time and put a lot of work into this chapter. The writing was terrific, pretty much free from typos and grammatical errors. I didn't notice any little inconsistencies.

And what a wonderful chapter it was. This was just superbly written. The warm, homey images you invoke, the subtle shades of emotion, it was just beautifully done. This chapter was a clinic for anyone who wants to learn how to convey the emotions of their characters without hitting the reader over the head with them. The joy and the loss and the whole bittersweet progression of life come through so clearly, without ever using any of those words.

More, more more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing yet another chapter! I'm so glad that you're enjoying this series that much! And I'm so happy that you liked the writing.

Eeee- I have such a huge smile on my face. I'm so happy that the emotions came through, since that was the main focus of this story.

The next (and last) chapter will definitely be coming soon!

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