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Review:Beeezie says:
This was also a great chapter. I often get thrown by chapters that are a bit disjointed, as this one was, but it worked really well with the story you were trying to tell - it hit the important points and really gave me a sense of Andromeda and her friends without spending a lot of time on their schooling, and if you'd broken each section up into its own chapter and expanded on it, I think that it would have weakened the flow rather than strengthened it. Excellent job. :)

Author's Response: The challenge also asked for no more than five chapters, otherwise I think I would have written more about her actual Hogwarts years; I was sure tempted. Even though, I was satisfied the way it turned out, and it's nice to hear you agree!
Thank you for the great feedback :)
P.S.: Did you get the dwarves reference? ;)

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