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Review:EnigmaticEyes16 says:
Okay, I read this last night and started to review it and then I must have gotten distracted because I only got one sentence down. Anyway, this is my fourth review, I believe. And I really liked this chapter. I liked the detail you put into it with the dark mark in the door and how the death eaters have to put their arm up to it in order to get in. That was really neat.

I also found it interesting how Voldemort likes to have conversations with Lily, like he might sort of play off ideas with her, but she turns him down to doing so solo and he never makes an physical advances. I thought it really said something about them, and about his respect for Lily, which showed even more when she interrupted him and he didn't punish her for it.

I wonder what's going to happen. If and when Lily finds Severus, I don't think she could actually stand to use the cruciatus curse on him. I could see her maybe trying but stopping the moment she sees the pain and agony she causes in him. And if she fails then Severus may get it twice as bad and she'll be seriously punished as well. Guess I have to continue reading to find out so off I go.

xxEnigmaticEyes16

Author's Response: Hey again!

I'm glad you liked my idea for the entrance. I figured Voldemort would want a little extra security, and using the Mark would ensure that only authentic Death Eaters could get in.

The Voldemort-Lily relationship is interesting to me. As a parallel to canon, he treats her with a little more respect than some of the others, because she's quieter and keeps to herself but clearly has great magical talent. I think their personalities are compatible, sort of like how Snape's is like Voldemort's a bit. It also made me consider how things would be different for a woman in Snape's position; we can't deny that the wizarding society was a bit male-dominated, and so I think it would be more difficult for a female to cope with that.

Thanks for your review! :)

academica


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