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Review:Akussa says:
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I really loved this opening chapter. The idea behind it is great and I think you showed a believable storyline. Harry was spot on. His reactions were perfectly canon and you really captured his original fear of not finding the platform and expended on that nicely.

I really enjoyed the conversations Harry had with his mind. They were believable and sad but definitly the kind of thoughts that plague you when you are in such a situation!

Great job with the opening chapter, it'll be interesting to read where this decision will lead Harry and Hedwig!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter, particularly as a beginning chapter.

As well I'm so glad it was realistic. I based the majority of his worries (at least before they took a magical turn) on my sorts of worries in those situations.


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