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Review:lilypotterfan123 says:
Loves this chapter! Every character was portrayed very well, the way you did that made the chapter as a whole really well. I also like the way how realistic this is, you know how some stories have dialogue which seems unrealistic because you doubt you'd ever say it like that? Well yours was the complete opposite each bit of dialogue seemed natural and realistic. The description was good though it could have been a little more in depth. I can't talk though, description is hard for me :

Bex x

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter as well as all the others. I'm so glad that the dialogue was realistic- that tends to be the part of the story that I have the most problems with.

And thanks for your comment about the description- I'll look at it again.

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