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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hey there! Only last night, I was reviewing the first chapter and now here I am...once again! :D

Okay.. so first off, this chapter was really cute! It was all about lopsided smiles and Callum!

I really feel like Callum is the person to trust. He's so easy going, funny and he seems friendly from what I've read but there's this small part of my brain saying that opposes. I don't know, I guess there's a bit of excitement and mystery in him but I'm 80% sure that the Ministry sent him as a 'spy' or maybe Dumbledore did?!

So far a very interesting plot and chapter! I'm really excited for all the explanations on why Daphne and, if applicable/possible, Callum didn't get their letters when they were 11!

My praises to you for creating such interesting and unique story, not only that but you took the courage to actually write it and publish it here. Not many authors can do that since they can't really base the plot with anything from the books and movies.

I'm so glad you wrote this!
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Hey again! I'm so happy you came back to review chapter 2!
I'm really really glad you liked this chapter and the plot :) I'm also very happy about how you feel about Callum, its exactly the way I wanted to portray him, a little mysterious and charming so that the reader feels like they have to make the same decision as Daphne about whether to trust him or not :)

Thank you so much for coming by and reviewing!

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