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Review:LionsRule says:
Hey there! LionsRule here from the forums with your requested review! ^_^

What an interesting idea! This was a very original idea for a comedy piece. You put a very evil character into a very hilarious position, and you combined him with Rita Skeeter, which was a very good idea. I could tell this was going to be a funny story even after just reading the summary.

You had some very interesting scenes in here that made me laughed. I loved how you had Voldemort admit that all he ever wanted was to be loved. XD I also laughed when you had Lee Jordan make a joke about the Weasley family. Even though this was a very original and absurd idea, you stuck to the characters very well! I cannot compliment you enough on your creativity, but what I also like is how you somehow managed to keep it cannon.

Oh my gosh. Your Cedric Diggory being reborn as a vampire made me laugh so hard. You added in a Twilight joke in your story, but it fit into the plot, so it was absolutely perfect. Your portrayal of Harry was also hilarious! The “nosy” joke also made me laugh. The best part was when Bellatrix ran onto stage, and Molly Weasley kept repeating her famous line in different contexts. Classic! In short, I was just basically laughing throughout this entire piece. Well done!

I found a few errors with spelling and grammar, but they were minor. In one instance, you spelled “Serious” instead of “Sirius”. However, a one-shot beta over at the forums will be able to go over your story and fix all of the mechanics for you. You should also look into getting a banner over at the dark arts, which will attract more readers to your story.

Overall, this was an excellent piece. To answer your area of concern, your humor was very effective. It was refreshing to read a funny piece after reviewing serious stories all day. I’ll be adding this to my favorites, now. Amazing job! ^_^

- Jacqueline

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review, I'm so glad you liked the humor! This was definetely a fun story to write.

Oops, it looks like I fell for my own pun when it came to Sirius:)

Thanks again! -James


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