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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Hey there!

I really loved the premise of this story. It is amazing to sit down and consider that the black sisters were children once, before there was death eaters and stigmas and societal implications for them to live with. I love the style and feel it was executed fairly well. I think as you write it, the voice of this piece will grow and become very distinct and lovely. There were a few small things I'd consider changing in the way of editing, but instead of marring up this review with all that, I'll just shoot you a PM.

All in all, I was sad that the second chapter wasn't posted, because I'd definitely have continued reading onward.

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reviewing, and for the PM - it was really helpful!

It's an idea that I find really interesting, because no one was born evil. Even Bellatrix was a child once, after all.

I am working on the voice and the style of this and hopefully it will grow as I keep going! I'm still experimenting, so it's good to know what works and what doesn't as much.

The second chapter has been written and is being edited - I put it aside for November, but I'm working on it now. Thank you very much for the review! :)


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