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Review:LoopyLemon says:
Wow. Just. Wow. That was really really good. The idea was really original and you kept it plausible the entire way through. I loved how both Lily and Rose broke the normal conventions for the way they are characterised and how they were both such well built characters. You had me genuinely terrified when Lily joined the Honour Guard and I loved how you got her in and out of it. There were so many plot twists throughout the story and each one was pulled off flawlessly and fitted the story perfectly. I loved this story so much. It progressed really naturally. It started off by introducing the characters with a start that was light and easy to follow. The story then started down it's dark and twisted path but at no point was anything unbelievable or out of character. I loved the inputs of Severus each time we saw inside the Head's office. That was very clever and well done. It could have been drawn out longer but it didn't need to. The story never felt as if you were simply filling space. It was well thought out and the pace kept me interested and kept me coming back for more. I could barely bear to stop reading and I'm glad I kept reading because this story surely was a gem. Good job and keep up the good work. I love your writing, I'm pretty sure you know that, and I have to say I'm nervous about reading any of your WIPs cause I'm sure to get very impatient if they aren't updated fast enough :P

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