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Review:EnigmaticEyes16 says:
Did you just decide to switch everyone's life/personality? Cause that's what I'm starting to think. Not that I'm against it. I'm just really surprised that you picked Sirius to lure Lily to the Dark Side. It's also a little surprising because she's a Hufflepuff, and maybe it's just because the last two stories I've read about Hufflepuff contained everyone being buddy-buddy, but I'm surprised that no one else in her house would want to be her friend, or even talk to her. But I guess I can see how that would turn her dark. She doesn't like a lot of people so she wants to prove that she's amazing at everything and hates them for not liking her. Although I also find it interested that Sirius is interested in Lily, because let's face it there were four guys and one girl and we've all had suspicions that Sirius or Remus or both were also in love with Lily; she's so amazing, how could they not be? But I also find it interesting that you picked Narcissa (did not even think of her when you mentioned that blond girl) to be interested in Snape, because we've also wondered, because of the unbreakable vow, if something was there between them. I wonder if these things even occurred to you, it happens to me all the time someone reads my stuff and takes some deep meaning out of that I hadn't even caught on to yet.

Well, keep up the good work! And I will make sure I come back for the last chapter if I've finished the five reviews before it's posted. Or I may save the fifth review for the last chapter. I don't know yet. What review am I on, my third? And there's six more to go already? Yeah, I might just come back and give you a special review for your last chapter.


Author's Response: I didn't necessarily switch everything about everyone. I made some changes that would be pivotal to the plot -- Sirius, for example, is extremely important here. I know Hufflepuffs are typically painted as being really sweet, but Lily is kind of an oddball and I needed her to be ostracized so she would fit in with Sirius. That's reflective of Snape from canon. I chose Sirius because I thought it would be neat to explore the "what if" scenario, considering his family's background from canon. As for Narcissa, I had always wanted to try a Snape/Narcissa, and she seemed to fit here. Their potential from canon did occur to me, though :)

Your reviews are lovely. Thank you!


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