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Review:EnigmaticEyes16 says:
Ah, this is for the Switched Personality Challenge, gotcha. That makes more sense now. I feel less lost. Totally didn't see that or really catch on when I read your summary.

This is certainly curious. After figuring out the switched personalities thing, I was surprised that Lily was sorted into Hufflepuff and Severus into Ravenclaw. And Sirius was sorted into Slytherin and Remus stayed in Gryffindor and I'm not sure who James is yet, unless he's the boy she followed onto the platform and then he ended up in Ravenclaw with Severus. And I'm really curious to know who this blonde girl is watching him. Although I do like how you kept their talents, Snape and his interest in Potions from growing up with it, and Lily was skilled in charms, right? I'm pretty sure she was. This story is getting more and more interesting. I just want to keep reading it.

Sorry this review isn't as long. You're doing a really good job with this story though!

xxEnigmaticEyes16

Author's Response: Yeah, I tried to mix it up a little, as I tend to find the Gryffindor-Slytherin rivalry a little overdone. James actually doesn't make an appearance in this story except in the beginning; if you'll recall, he's a Muggle in this plot. The boy who got sorted into Ravenclaw with Severus is a character from canon, though, one who will be sort of important in later chapters. James's role will be replaced by someone else who was hinted at near the end of this chapter :) I did want to keep the talents, though, because I think they're fitting.

Thanks for another great review :)

academica


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