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Review:Pacific Wizard says:
YelloWitchGrl: First let me say that I am so sorry for your loss. I think you are amazing for writing a lovely story about this subject matter when you are experiencing this type of trauma in your life. My only wish is that by writing this excellent story, you have a chance to find solace and peace by expressing yourself. You are a very brave person.

This story is well written and your depiction of the characters is spot on. The dialogue between Harry and Ginny is engaging. I thought the little subplots about Fluer and Bill and Viktor were interesting and nicely done. Teddy's impact on Harry and Ginny is an excellent storyline and now you've added some intrigue with the attack on Andromeda. Can't wait to see what Ginny does to Harry for sending her home out of harm's way. In some respects I think Harry should know that doing that to Ginny would make facing Voldemort look like a walk in the park. I'd have Poppy standing by if I were Harry. Nice touch though of having Ginny care for Teddy and having Molly come by because "she just knew' Ginny would need some help.

I not into a lot of fluff but this is really a nice story that deals with real life situations and you're capturing its essence. Well done and I will keep reading. I am a fan. PW

Author's Response: Thank you. It was good, in a weird way, finishing the story. It was closing the chapter on a book that I started before my first miscarriage. I hate leaving things undone. It just bugs me.

I'm so into fluff. Usually not the annoyingly overly sweet fluff, but stuff that I can see as really having a chance of happening. I'm glad you liked it and hopefully the next chapter gets validated shortly.


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