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Review:Singularity says:
Hi there :) It's Singularity from the Doctor Who Challenge with your review (finally). I'm kind of slow...sorry...

This was a cute little story. I liked the idea of Luna comforting George just by being her eccentric self. It was quite sweet.

I noticed a few typos scattered throughout the story, so you might want to go back through and proofread or get yourself a beta to help catch some of those minor mistakes. It wasn't anything too terrible though. I still found your story easy to read, which is always nice.

I am such a canon freak, so one of my favorite parts was when George mentioned that the Burrow was perfect intact. YES! The Burrow did not burn down you silly movie makers. It's fine! So bonus points for that :)

That was one of my favorite DW quotes, and I thought you used it nicely. I would've liked to see a little more conversation between George and Luna to make the quote blend in a little bit better, but I tend to write dialogue heavy, super sentimental stories, so it's just a personal preference :P

The ending was really great. I thought it was a really excellent way to end the story and to show that George is starting to heal and move forward.

Overall, I thought you did a really nice job. Thank you so much for entering my challenge :)

Author's Response: Hi! *waves* it's okay, everyone gets busy and especially with NaNo :)
Thanks :) I always get nervous writing Guna stories.
I just went back and edited it, hopefully I got all the mistakes.
The Burrow did not burn down! I refuse to say it! Stupid Hollywood! Yay! Bonus Points haha!
Yeah, it didn't really fit in with the rest of the conversation as well as it could have but I tried; it was hard with the first bit :)
And thanks, it was fun challenge to enter :)


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