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Review:Owlpost68 says:
I loved this little story about her wand, it was sweet. The only thing is that when Bill arrived you didn't say how, did he knock on the door? did he floo? apparate? it would help to get some kind of flow into the story from, he wasn't there for a week or so, to he was there all of a sudden.
Like I said though, this was a nice moment of sharing about her own family :)

Author's Response: I just read it back and i agree he just sort of appeared in the chapter, hmm i may need to go back and sort that out. Thank you for the review.

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