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Review:Owlpost68 says:
The chapter itself seemed a little disjointed, maybe it's just me, and I feel bad for not being able to really explain it well. I almost feel like you could have just started the chapter with Bill bringing her home, not even from work, and when he had to leave since Monique was there, maybe they could have had a girl talk?
They are very cute together though :) I love their interactions with each other!

Author's Response: It isn't just you, most of the chapters have become like filler chapters for the main plot of the Harry Potter books and fillers are quite boring to write for me so i think i rushed them all and the whole story could use a little editing but i was just so happy to finish it. Thanks for the honest review though i appreciate help.

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