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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
Excellent, excellent, excellent. I love Athena's snarky attitude. She is very quick witted and really just throws herself into situations. I can already see that. She doesn't seem to think too much and that might be her downfall.

It'll be interesting to see if he can actually brew the potion because it's very hard to brew it, isn't it? He seems kind of cocky thinking that he can.

I like that your chapters aren't long by the way, it's sort of like reading a James Patterson book, you get so much done/said in less than 2,500 words that it makes the story seem much quicker, like BAM, action. I really like that because I'm usually put off by action filled fics because they explain everything.

Author's Response: Oh, you're back! Good to see you again! :)

Athena is quite a complex character. I've been writing her for a long time now, eighteen months at least, and every new chapter I write she reveals more about herself. I think it's interesting you think she doesn't think too much; in all honesty she tends to overanalyse things a lot. But in saying that, she's also very confident, borderline arrogant, in her own decisions and never sees any reason to second-guess herself.

Cassian is a very competent wizard. He's a very studious and intelligent person, so precise magic like potion making comes quite naturally to him. Though he is very confident in his abilities, so there's a definite similarity between him and Athena there.

I remember you commenting on the shorter chapters on Legend of a Thousand Winters, so I'm glad that style works for you. I don't tend to write any chapters longer than 2500 words - most of the time they're around 1500.

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