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Review:Tyler says:
Excellent, I really love the last line. Very well written, so many little structure tools used in the narration that just make it flow so beautifully.
My absolute ONLY issue was the fact that I felt it was a little quick for Lilly to accept Draco as a safe-person, if you know what I mean. In the real world most kids that meet their real parent (or a new foster parent for that matter) aren't perfectly comfortable at any given instant - it's a process that takes time, even years.
I know you gave us some of that process just by telling about Lilly's growing up and encountering Draco and the train station, and seeing her mum talking to someone, and piecing together all the little details. But I just felt like it needed a little bit more.
Still, it is so lovely in the writing style and the over-all concept, I just enjoyed it thoroughly. Excellent work!

Author's Response: thank you so very much for your kind words and constructive criticism! I had written this as an exchange on the Draco/Ginny community on LJ, so I probably would have included more of that if I had intended for it to be a huge thudding tract, but alas I was coming close to the deadline XD Thanks again!

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