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Review:silverstarletworld89 says:
Hi!!

First off I want to apologise for taking so long to get round to doing this, it wasn't m interntion of leaving it that long. Also Congratulations again!!

I have to say that your desriptions and actions are truly wonderful, you paint the image in my head perfectly with the words that you write down. 'He moves and her head is thrown back against the pillows, pale throat exposed. She can see, feel, the desperate passion that underscores the act.' . This line really stood out to me because you convey both so well.

I enjoyed your characterization of Bella, as you didn't stray to far from how she is in the book. It's like a little type of insight to what she would be like if she did have children. And I like how you didn't make her compltely evil without any emotions, you gave us justification of why she felt like that - 'She met her son when he was already grown and he was scared of her on sight.' - ' It hurts something inside of Bellatrix. And she hates him for that.'

I enjoyed the pace and how everything flowed, and I loved the Dark/angsty side to it.

Very addicting story and I thought you ended it well with the last line, as it made a great statement!

Silverstarletworld :)

Author's Response: Totally fine on the delay! I just took an equally long time in answering them!

I was a bit hesitant on the whole first scene as it's as close to graphic as I've ever gotten (and probably ever will to be honest). I'm glad it pulled of.

Thank you so much for the kind words in this review! This story was "on a limb" kind of thing for me and I'm happy that it came out okay!

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