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Review:ImagineHarmony says:
I think you portrayed Hermione very nicely! Her thoughts were convincing though I felt that the Ron walking out scene was... unconvincing. It was a bit rushed, you could've explained it better on how she found it.

Though, keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Thank you for taking your time to review! :)

And I understand what you're saying. I was doing it from Hermione's prespective and frankly, I wasn't quite sure on what she would be thinking at the moment. She was disoriented at that moment (as you know) and she wasn't believing what she was seeing. Saying that, I mean that she was not viewing the situation with the usual normal rational thinking. So it had to be a little vaguer. Though, I'll admit I had trouble thinking about what I should write about... I know it was rushed. I read it through a couple of times; I need to work on having patience when writing about certain scenes. :P

Thanks for reading!


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