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Review:thelovinspoonful says:
Okay, now things make a little more sense. You can rearrange the order of chapters under the manage stories page on your account, btw. I think you've written Ginny's reasoning and reactions to the changes fairly well. I liked how you pointed out that if she stayed in Gryffindor she would just be the youngest Weasley, whereas if she moved into Slytherin, she really had a chance to develop herself. That was well played.

However, I was really confused about Harry. In the first chapter you made it sound as if he was pining after Ginny, and now, on the way to Dumbledore's office, he's got his heart set (a little distastefully) on Cho - but is checking to make sure Ginny still has a crush on him? That could use a little straightening out. Another point was the sudden introduction of skipping grades... I'm not sure if I missed that information, or if you didn't mention it until Ron and Harry got back to the common room. There's a lot, lot of drastic changes going on so far, and it's getting a little difficult to keep track of what's going on.

Author's Response: The whole Harry thing was one of my biggest mess-ups. When I wrote this chapter I didn't really pay attention to what had happened in the first one so I contradicted myself and it's just a mess. I never went back to fix it and i should but as I said in my first review response I really don't have much time.
I'm glad you liked Ginny's reaction and thank you again for this review. I do truly appreciate it:]


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